I've been working on a snippet of a story called "The Falling" and I'm hoping for some constructive criticism. Any grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, or things that just don't sound right! I'd love to hear any and all feedback. I work full time and go to school full time, so this story is being written in those few precious moments of respite.
So if anyone out there would be so kind as to take a look at the first snippet I would greatly appreciate it!