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Aeraeara

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Artist // Hobbyist // Artisan Crafts
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My Bio
Current Residence: Somewhere between insanity and delerium...
Favourite genre of music: Emo, Punk, Rock, Alternative...
Favourite photographer: Whitney Lane

Favourite Visual Artist
Thomas Kinkade
Favourite Movies
The Day After Tomarrow or Blade Trinity...
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Green Day, Good Charlotte, Taking Back Sunday
Favourite Writers
Steven King, Anne Rice, Dean Koontz
Favourite Games
Any Spyro Game
Favourite Gaming Platform
Game Cube
Tools of the Trade
Pencil
Other Interests
Art, music, computers...
I've been working on a snippet of a story called "The Falling" and I'm hoping for some constructive criticism. Any grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, or things that just don't sound right! I'd love to hear any and all feedback. I work full time and go to school full time, so this story is being written in those few precious moments of respite. So if anyone out there would be so kind as to take a look at the first snippet I would greatly appreciate  it!
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dAfuq is up with deviantART? This new layout totally blows. I can't browse art because my computer isn't fast enough to load all of these full sized images. DA, you guys suck.
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thanks for the watch :heart::heart:
No love on your page in over a year ? :grump: Well then..

:party: :cake: :dance:
Has it really been a year? How time flys! <3
Thanks a ton for the watch!
Thanks for the watch :)
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